Jon-86's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Little Wheel]

No bad

I'm guessing you take your inspiration from Oddworld! Always loved that game, if not then its a good coincidence! Still nicely done if a do say so ma self!

[The Joys of MSN]

not the best..but not the worst.

Only one question really.....

For something so simple, why dose it have a massive filesize?

Probaly the audio, but you could have easily din this in < 1MB

Heil responds:

i am really sorry about that, there was alot of actionscript to this, did you not find the easter egg?

[Golden Arrow 3]

Fun

Nice job....I got the silver medal :D
Also good to see something that dosnt involve guns.....

Nothing wrong with guns just archery requires lot more skill....

I was expecting to hear "Loose" when you ran out of time to shoot....
But that probaly would have gotten annoying...

- Jon.

[Away Cubes]

decent

Its ok, nice they way you interact with the squares and the purpose they are used for.

But even you must know it will be hard to go anywhere....
The only thing I can think of is a time limit in chich you try to click as many as you can in the time.....

So appart from that good job, decent effort.

[Menulis]

Great

I loved this game...I dont know why.
I want to see more of your strange world :D

Will you make more?

[Get The Stars]

Keep going

Ah you fixed the bug, and you also added a few extra changes.

Now You should think about adding to it.
Different power-ups, enemies etc.
Mabey even something that changes that background or object that appear and stuff bounce off them, to make it a little harder.

Good job.

- Jon.

[Get The Stard]

Not bad

I found a bug :)

when you die, you get a 5 seconds of invincibility.
and when you collect a power-up you get 45 seconds of invincibility.

But if you collect the power-up just after you die, it cancels the invincibility after the 5 seconds ends, even if it says you have 42 seconds left or something.

Don't know it it is intentional, if it is then this can be a tip for other players, not to waste their power-up by collecting it too soon.

- Jon.

[- Block Puzzle -]

Not bad

Harder levels would have made this better.
Mabey nicer graphics too, but you should concentrate on level design first.

[Electric Bar]

Fun to play

This is one of those small simple games that can be so addictive.
Like tetris or something.

It reminds me of that game you get where you have to make the loop go around the wire maze and if you tough the wire it completes the circuit and a buzzer goes off.

Well done.